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Tuesday 8 June 2021

my intresting story

 Kia ora Bloggers,

This week I have been learning to write non chronological reports.i

I am proud of this because I like writing about dog bats and 

The part I found challenging was writigh hard sentins 

 I have a picture to show you too you are going to be blown away it will interest you to bloggers.


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1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Angus,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I really like how you included the picture so that we could all see what it looked like. My favourite sentence is in your conclusion: "The Batdog can be summed up in one word, vicious." This sentence is very effective. Why do you think we should all learn about Batdogs?
    Mrs Taylor :)

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